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Post by xxxgothickittenxxx on Nov 29, 2009 18:34:29 GMT -5
Okay, I totally messed up the perfect plot. I was listening to the song ‘Mordred’s lullaby’ and for some reason I was thinking of Auburncoat. After a few minutes of the song I heard the line ‘Guileless son, each day you'll grow older. Each moment I'm watching my vegence unfold. The child of my body, the flesh of my soul, will die in returning the birth right he stole.’
Then I imagined something, what if Skypetal kitted Crowtalon’s kits and raised one of them to be a tool, a killing machine to get rid of Viperstar? (But she’s already dead so we can throw that idea aside) But I thought it would be neat, because Skypetal still feels if Viperstar would have died Auburncoat would still be there, a leader and the perfect warrior. It’s her fault Auburncoat is gone (in her mind) and if Auburncoat was still there Brokenfaith would still be there too. But Skypetal doesn't want the guilt of murder on her paws so she'd make her son do it. Too bad Viperstar's dead, LOL
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Post by Whiskerwing on Nov 30, 2009 17:07:05 GMT -5
Hmmm...Sounds like an awesome idea but I don't imagine Skypetal doing something like that, even if it was for Auburncoat. But, maybe we can change it a little to make it work. What if, instead, she had Crowtalon's kits but one of them got lost and met Auburncoat and an older Oysterpaw. Then, uh, Auburncoat and Osyterpaw could train him to kill Viperstar's followers and weaken ShadowClan so they could return.
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Post by xxxgothickittenxxx on Dec 7, 2009 9:39:07 GMT -5
Maybe you're right... *sighs* And random, I just watched Brother Bear and I wondered: Did the warrior cats live in alaska alongside bears, mammoths, and man? That'd be super-ific.
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Post by Whiskerwing on Dec 9, 2009 9:37:34 GMT -5
Hmmm....I'd never thought about it. But, I'm reading this book series called the Chronicles of Ancient Darkness. It doesn't have cats in it but it's in the Stone Age and all the people live in Clans just like the Warrior cats do. It's awesome! There's Rowan Clan, Wolf Clan, Raven Clan, Seal Clan, Mountain Hare Clan, and whole bunch. It's just, every time read some of the books I think about warriors. It's weird. Oh yeah, and the bad guys are a bunch of evil mages, which are the medicine people, who do stuff with demons. It's cool.
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Post by Bhuvana on Feb 5, 2010 16:31:07 GMT -5
Hmm, I wonder if we can still make this work... Now that Brokenfaith and Auburnstar are together and in love, they could have kits at some point that could go to avenge them by killing off Viperstar loyal kitties.....I wouldn't put it past Brokenfaith, because at the end, she HATED Viperstar with a whicked passion...Applebirch too, so any friends of his are her enemies...
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Post by xxxgothickittenxxx on Feb 5, 2010 21:59:18 GMT -5
Sounds perfect, do you have any ideas for names? I'm already thinking of new cats and personalities. I'm definately making Auburncoat a son.
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Post by Whiskerwing on Feb 6, 2010 11:40:43 GMT -5
Sweet! Do you think Oysterpaw could be like his mentor?
OMG! Just thought this. What if Auburncoat's son was in the prophecy?
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Post by xxxgothickittenxxx on Feb 6, 2010 12:17:55 GMT -5
That'd be awesome! You're a genius!
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Post by Whiskerwing on Feb 6, 2010 18:57:08 GMT -5
Shucks, Tiger! I'd love to be modest about it but I'd say you're right. I am a genius!
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Post by Bhuvana on Feb 7, 2010 7:47:35 GMT -5
Not sure about names and personalities, but I sure want a daughter that looks just like Brokenfaith's mother, this will cause conflicting emotions for the queen (though she doesn't have the heart to be cruel to kits, especially the spawn of Auburnstar, lol). Are they going to have Clan names, you think? And progress through the names like in clan life (ex: Adderkit, Adderpaw, Adderbite)?
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Post by xxxgothickittenxxx on Feb 11, 2010 21:27:41 GMT -5
Since Auburncoat still dwells on his Clan I'd say he himself would want to name them Clan names. What if they sent their kits to the Clans so they could kill Viperstar supporters from the inside out? Then after the mission was done one of them would return to tell Auburncoat and Brokenfaith and they'd come back to the Clans to take over, mwahahahahahaa!
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Post by Bhuvana on Feb 14, 2010 8:08:41 GMT -5
Awesome idea! And Skypetal could have a place in this plot because if any of he kits look anything like Auburnstar or Brokenfaith, she'd be the first to notice
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Post by xxxgothickittenxxx on Feb 14, 2010 8:31:53 GMT -5
Exactly! I think eventually the Clan would notice how similar they are and they might start treating them like traitors (like Bramblepaw and Tawnypaw) but Skypetal will be like the only one who likes and or defends them. I wonder if their kits might kill Skypetal, thinking she's against Auburncoat and Brokenfaith... Do you have any ideas for names? I think Auburncoat's son should look just like him, except a bit smaller (not too much, like an inch) and have Brokenfaith's green/hazel looking eyes. But I want people to think he looks just like him, like the exact reflection of Auburncoat so it freaks some of them out. I was thinking something harmless sounding like Cinnamonkit, what about their daughter?
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Post by Bhuvana on Feb 15, 2010 19:18:20 GMT -5
Great idea! That'd be fun for Skypetal to be their defense...and it's up to you whether or not they kill her; your kitty!
Hmm, I never made a real description for Brokenfaith's mother, but I do know that Brokenfaith looks more like her father than her mother...so, I guess the female kit will be a bulkier build compared to Brokenfaith (since Brokenfaith's mother was naturally muscular)...The pelt will be medium length and tabby markings (http://www.wettropics.gov.au/st/rainforest_explorer/Resources/Images/ferals/FeralCat.jpg) This'll be about what the kit looks like when she's full grown, 'ccept she'll have Auburncoat's eyes I agree that they should have "friendlier" names, so as to not make it so obvious that they don't come from kind hearted backgrounds Hmm, I suppose my little female can be named Shykit/paw/smile (one of my kitties in the stories I write)...because, though she is trained to do harm to other cats, she is a "silent but deadly" type...Her tactics are play it innocent, always show kindness and compassion, this way no one ever suspects her when something goes wrong...So she gets her quiet shyness from the old Brokenfaith...but a deadly lust from the newer Brokenfaith and Auburnstar...also, she gets a brave determination and loyalty from Auburnstar...yet another reason no one would ever suspect her. The way she sees things is that her Clan is second only to her family, so she'd die for her Clan...but she obediently listens to her parents and brothers orders, too. And she believes everything her parents demand and teach are for the wellbeing of ShadowClan in the long run
And since she doesn't have any physical resemblance to her parents (ccet the eyes), the Clan believes her a traitor because they reconize your male with Auburnstar, and they know Shykit is his sis so they make the connection that way
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Post by xxxgothickittenxxx on Feb 15, 2010 19:35:11 GMT -5
I also noticed Brokenfaith was more into getting revenge than Auburncoat was, what if she was the one who came up with the idea and is pretty much the evil mastermind, and Auburncoat kind of follows.
So I was thinking the tom could be Cinnamonkit.
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